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Until one day, the three men were out. Jackson and Greg began telling Edward how miserable his life was. From home to work, and from work to home. With hardly any money to survive with. They finally came up to the point and Greg said “so what about you working with drugs”? “This job can make you have five million dollars a year”. “Imagine yourself, having a very big and fancy hotel, with a car worth billions of dollars, body guards always walking with you…” Jackson continued and said “plus, you becoming very famous, people always wanting to take your autographs, and paparazzi chasing you all the time”. Edward told them he’ll think about it and left.

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Carl Edwards Autograph

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